tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229842105555608930.post7495844854870002322..comments2023-10-30T07:47:39.062-07:00Comments on Peta-gaye Brown : Lyrics Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09829366317982523939noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229842105555608930.post-74817977195456350632013-03-15T16:07:15.902-07:002013-03-15T16:07:15.902-07:00Hey P-G,
What I suggest you do is, for the moment...Hey P-G,<br /><br />What I suggest you do is, for the moment just break down into sections the bioscientific information you need to communicate - the main points - and don't worry about the blues formation or the rhymes. I can see from the above that you're getting there, but also that some of your verses are struggling to rhyme etc. If you provide a break down of the things you need the verses to explain and post them on here, I'll take a look :)<br /><br /><br />tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com