Premise
Beauty obsessions can
cause fatalities
Logline
A surgeon falls in
love with a client, her obsession with renovating her body causes her death.
The Surgeon heartbroken and alone commits suicide in an attempt to be closer to
her.
Step outline
We witness an elderly
woman in her 60’s undergo numerous cosmetic procedures to make her look young.
She’s successful and her surgeon falls in love with her asking her to marry
him.
Now married to the
surgeon the woman gets free procedures, and wants her husband to perform the
latest surgical procedure on her.
The machine
malfunctions the woman comes out beautiful but she’s preserved and dead.
The surgeon looses his
credibility turning his surgery into a taxidermist, after many years he decides
to enter the machine so that he can stay preserved with his wife.
I'm not quite sure if the way you did the step outline is correct :I
ReplyDeleteI think it needs to be more like a general description of the scenes you are going to show in your pre-viz :I
http://dramaticarc.files.wordpress.com/2011/04/step-outline.pdf
maybe looking through this website could help you a little bit?