Sunday, 21 October 2012

The Glass city

I decided to stick with image 6  as  it was a unanimous agreement in the comments, i developed it a bit by adding some houses in the foreground, I feel like its nearly there but it just needs something else, maybe some more stalagmites in the foreground.

1 comment:

  1. Okay - there's a bit of dead space on the right - and I'm wondering if some glass buildings in the foreground would a) offer the audience a bit more sense that these structures are in fact dwellings, and b) resolve the slight compositional weakness of this existing image - as if we're looking past some dwellings very close to us, and looking across and down into the main city? Try it - another layer, and some foreground elements to the right of the image. I think it will also suggest greater depth in the image as a whole. Have a go and see...