After reading the feedback on my Online Greenlight review my character biographies weren't coming across in my script so after Tutor Phil's encouragement i've slightly changed the biographies but i've kept the same story structure.
A surgeon falls in love with a patient, she comes in every few months to the surgery wanting to enhance something new about her body. Although from the beginning she was always beautiful to the surgeon. When he can see that she’s now confident about herself he asks for her hand in marriage. He knew her as a child and always thought that her quirky appearance was attractive. When he can see that she’s now confident about herself he asks for her hand in marriage. The surgeon only wants to make Stella happy and will do anything to do this.
Stella Gleanburg has always been teased as a young child referred to as the ugly duckling in her family. After being emotionally scared for many years she decided to undergo a few surgical enhancements to make her feel better about herself. After her many trips to her plastic surgeon she began to fall in love with the man that was able to make her beautiful, and was happy to accept his proposal. Although she now had someone who accepted her for who she was, she was still obsessed with her physical appearance.