Saturday, 19 January 2013

The Script for Idea 8: Storytelling and Commission

I decided to go with idea 8 and to start on a script this is what iv'e come up with. 

Script Idea by Peta-gaye Brown 

I like the script but its running time is 1:19 seconds I was thinking that I could get rid if the opening scene. If you think there is a part that is not needed please feel free to comment below, also if you think of something that I could change in terms of camera direction to make the scene more effective please feel free to comment.

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